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Re: Mitosis Rap
ha Girl! That's funny! I love it. You know Ms.Reed almost put me in that class. She said Nathaniel and I could keep up. ha I know right?! But I ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Love You Forever
Oh my gosh cat!!! i love this poem!!! It reminds me of what I would write. You would know that because you have read what I tend to write a ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: It's Over
I can't stay together with someone like you, You don't care about me. You care about you. This is what you've been waiting for. I can already tell. There are ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: American Love
Wow. This poem shows such feeling I hadn't thought much of. It really makes you think. It doesn't rhyme, which to me, is different. It shouldn't be because that's not ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: If Life is But a Dream
Wow! It seems like every poem I look at randomly, appears to be written by you. I love your poems!!! I would actually like to have a book of poems ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Winter Dust
I like it. I like the variety of large words. I like an expanded vocabulary. Snowflakes are such a wonderful thing to write about
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: From the Inside, Out: expresses the hurts of an outsider
Oh my gosh!!! I love this poem!!! I wish I could write stuff that deep. It's almost so in depth I can't understand. I mean I think it is amazing!!! ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: The First Time I Lost You
Befor last night, you were my world. But now it seems like I'm not your girl. She likes you. I guess you like her. She hates me. Yet, you seem ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: he loves her-she doesnt love him - the usual
Okay. I will try not to be too picky, as I usually am. You didn't use complete sentences and most everything written were fragments. It was hard for me to ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: The End of Us
You didn't separate your stanzas nor did you separate the lines in each stanza. Other than that I thought it was pretty good. I specialize in poetry. I'm just kidding. ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Harry Potter - There is never and end
Nice. I like it. Keep it up. I am more of a poet, but occasionally, I read books and the reviews posted for them. I read yours because I saw ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: A Monster, A Feind...
Hi. I like this poem. It's not what I'm used to. It seems very different to me in a good way and I would like to read more of this ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: A Monster, A Feind...
Hi. I like your poem. It's not the kind of poem that I'm used to.
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: My Love For You
[b]We've been together for quite a while, and still I can't help but to love your smile. Your laugh, your kiss, your love, your hugs. Baby, when I'm with you, ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: A Boy
[/b]In my head, a boy I see. But in my dreams, he's next to me. He makes me happy when I am sad. I love him a lot, and much ...
Dec 14, 2008
